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When Ally heads out for a night of fun, she is determined to meet the man of her dreams at the trendiest club in town. Armed with her girlfriends, she is drawn to a mysterious stranger leaning against the bar. She is mesmerized; Her friends, not as much. Something was peculiar about him. Despite her friends’ protests, she follows him outside and soon realizes that her world will never be the same.
Thrown into a completely different realm, with foes at every corner, she now understands, for the first time, that she will need to fight for her new love and overcome obstacles that will truly test her strength, determination and will.
"Bitten" is book one of the "Bitten" mini-series. Book two, Stolen, is now available at Smashwords and other distributors.
The grammar is horrible. The author skips freely between first and third person, past and present tense, and words completely left out. Free or not, it should have been proof-read. I haven't finished it yet, and the grammatical errors are definitely effecting my enjoyment.
Okay so I really liked the book. I'm totally into the whole vampire thing. And I love how you have it to where they have to mate and all. I haven't really read a lot like that. I wasn't too pleased with the the ending though. It just ended so abruptly. And I think it would have been better if it was in first person. The whole 3rd person thing kind of got confusing and a little annoying.
I know this is free and all, but "Bitten" is so terribly written and grammatically incorrect I could barely get through five pages. I felt like I was reading some wannabe writer schoolgirl fanfic.