An Unexpected Home
#1, A Cedarville Novel
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After a traumatic few years, Leah picks up and moves to the small lake town of Cedarville Ohio. Ready to finally find herself – possibly for the first time – she joins her friends and together they open a new business in town. She never expected to love Cedarville so much nor did she expect her heart to fall for the HOT AS SIN police chief, Brandon. But when someone from her past starts causing problems for her in her new home, she has no choice but to put her trust, and her heart, in Brandon’s hands to keep her and her friends safe.
***This book has been re-edited for errors and small mistakes.
Not sure how I feel about this book. I felt things were pretty flat between Leah and Brandon. I couldn’t really feel the feelings from Leah’s side and there wasn’t much of heartfelt romance between them. The one time they go on a date, they ended up leaving early to go have sex. Pretty late to stop reading considering I had about 100 or so pages left but I lost interest.
Nobody ran spellcheck before publishing
There are random numbers scattered throughout the book, missing commas, and a character's name is misspelled. While the plot was interesting, the errors caused so much distraction that I did not finish reading it.
Not worth a read
While the author has a good idea for a novel, her writing style is very choppy. There were several grammatical errors and too many comma errors to count just within the first few pages. I quit reading. Please find a good editor!