Loco, Razer 8
Razer 8 - Razer 8, no. 1
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Razer 8 takes you into the world of organized crime, kidnapping, politics, military romance and suspense thriller. Razer 8 Delta Force operatives are full of passion. Enjoy these amazing passionate men, a thrilling ride, and a dash of love.
Loco aka Roberto ~
The hard driven, ambitious delta force elite operative is immune to women. His heart has been destroyed by a treacherous woman and the unexpected loss of his family. These events have driven him nearly into insanity. The hard knocks in life propel him into grasping his emotions, his thoughts, and his physical condition. He focused on his goal. Loco doesn’t allow any type of distractions or obstacles to stop him. His actions and recklessness have earned him his nickname, Loco.
The Infinite power, Razer 8 operatives, are united and linked for infinity. His team mates recognize his pain, anger, and strength is derived from the intense impotency he feels from his loss.
The unexpected mission and unexpected encounter with his soul mate, tests his strength. His mind, heart, and soul recognize his love even before the actual encounter. The ruthless criminals threaten to harm his soul mate, pushing and transforming him into a fearless warrior.
Good book, bad execution …
While the plot was interesting, the words were choppy and more statements than anything. Plus, several words were WAY overused and the character perspective switched with no warning and could be long or just for a sentence or two... The timeline was also messed up; it goes from days to weeks and back quickly (also without warning). If written by another more experienced author, it has great potential, but this author really dropped the ball on this book...
I tried, I really tried
I tried to read this story hoping it would get better,but it didn't. I gave up. The story is so choppy with the sentence structure and its timeline that it makes it difficult to focus on what you're reading.
This story probably has potential, but needs a major revamp.
Credit for effort...
I believe it takes patience and creativity to write a book... therefore, I credit two stars. The content was adult but the writing was juvenile...
- Category: Mysteries & Thrillers
- Published: Aug 31, 2013
- Publisher: P.T. Macias
- Seller: Smashwords, Inc.
- Print Length: 187 Pages
- Language: English
- Series: Razer 8