Saving Sophie
At the Billionaire's Command Part 5
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4.1 • 187 Ratings
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Publisher Description
Sophie is getting used to the idea of being Alex Carey's girlfriend, especially when it comes to the things that happen behind closed doors. She's falling in love with him, but doesn't know if he feels the same way. When Sophie is kidnapped in broad daylight, trapped with no way to escape, will Alex Carey come to find her, despite the fact that he has a business trip scheduled worth hundreds of millions of dollars?
This 8,500 word story is the fifth installment in the romance between Sophie and the billionaire Alex Carey. If you enjoyed Fifty Shades of Grey, you'll love this series. Here's a sample of what to expect:
When she was ready, she went into Alex’s office, where he was hard at work comparing spreadsheets. He smiled when he noticed who it was, motioning her over. “Hey Sophie, how are you doing?” he asked, sitting her down on his lap and lightly touching the diamond choker she wore, a constant reminder of his ownership of her. Sophie giggled as he felt her up, tingles running through her.
“Oh I’m definitely good, thanks” she replied. “I’ve booked us on the 8:10, first class direct to Frankfurt tomorrow morning, and I’ve just got to go pick up your suit now.”
Alex played around with Sophie on his lap for a bit, running his hands along her body, up her skirt towards her pussy. Sophie let out a small moan as he turned her on.
Sophie blushed as she thought about what would happen if anyone walked in on them now, Sophie on Alex’s lap, her skirt hiked up, exposed for everyone to see.
Customer Reviews
Hero
Alex is Sophie's hero and she is so in love with him and he almost lost the one person who mattered...
Very amateur writing.
Very amateur writing. You use her name way to much in your sentence structure You do not lay enough ground work to help us understand why your character think, act and do the things they do. I admire your willingness and courage to put this out. Keep trying !
Unsafe practices
Although the story line and plot were good. Alex Sofia's dom secures her to a spanking bench with a sex machine going and leaves for 4 hours in his private dungeon! A good dom would never leave a restrained sub alone for any length of time. This is horribly unsafe as the sub could be trapped if there were a fire or if the dom was unable to return for whatever reason. I really started to dislike Alex by the end of the book. How could someone who supposedly loves someone so much that they would be turned on not only by sexual and physical torture but by risking their loved ones life? Hopefully no one reading this book is ignorant enough to follow the unsafe practices.