The Billionaire's Obsession: An Heir at Any Price Book One
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Aiden Scott is a man accustomed to getting exactly what he wants; a charismatic, handsome, charming CEO of multiple companies, he has the world at his fingertips, yet there's one obsession he cannot ignore. He desires an heir...
Holly Valentine is a woman in desperate circumstances; an alcoholic mother in need of rehab, and a dead-end job, her life is spiralling out of control. All until she meets a man - and an offer - she can't refuse...
Desiring a child he can raise as his own, without the complexities that maintaining a stable, married life would bring, Aiden has a proposition for Holly; cold hard cash, and the assurance she'll mother his only child. But can Holly assuage her feelings for Aiden long enough to go through with the deal? And will the charismatic billionaire find himself unexpectedly falling for the prospective mother of his child?
Whatever happens, Aiden Scott is about to find out that some things can't be bought...
I'm giving it three stars because I absolutely loved the outline for this story! But the way it was written could have been so much better. The author could have made the book so much better by holding out the important information and keeping the readers guessing. Oh well, next time I guess.
Waste of time
Poorly written. Boring and predictable. Characters are not even likeable. Seems like a first attempt at writing. Try again!
This book needs a good editing for sentence structure and punctuation to make it more readable. Then it needs rephrasing to help the characters have actual feelings that are conveyed to the reader, instead of just being simply stated as a fact. It was strange. Way too many pages spent on beginning material and not enough on what should have been the meat of the story - the character's love story.
- Category: Contemporary
- Published: Oct 03, 2014
- Publisher: Forbidden Fruit Press
- Seller: Smashwords
- Print Length: 202 Pages
- Language: English